This is one character that I don’t think will make the cut. But that’s part of the fun. Sketching away, populating an imaginary world. I like this lumbering guy, but he just doesn’t fit with the type of world that I’m creating. I’ll post some characters that did make it shortly.

He looks a bit too ‘out of it’ to do any serious damage to anyone. And more of the other characters you ahve posted to your world look, for one reason or another, like serious operators
On the other hand, may be her might make a good contrast